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衡量一个人价值的标准是什么？如果我们认定a person's worth is based on how much he or she produces，那么我们就会得到这样的结论：the more we do, the more we're worth；而对于这样的态度，我们考生知道，应该是反对的，因为有fall prey to the misconception这类的字眼提示，我们应该寻找另外的标准。本文作者寻找到了quality这个标准，并且在第一句话就轻松地“亮剑”，好！

One of the biggest recent scandals in the business world involved many executives from Enron. These men were focusedon how much they could produce, on how much money they could make for themselves. To increase their production, they engaged in risky, illegal, and unethical business practices that eventually led to the total destruction of the entire company and ruined the lives thousands of Enron employees and investors. Although the dollar value of these men may have been very high at one time, their current value and worth has plummeted. If we think of value in another sense, with a humanitarian or social slant, it becomes even more obvious that these men now have little worth in the eyes of their peers, former employees, and former stockholders. The Enron executives should have focused on making a quality product rather than on quantity in order to maintain a successful company along with satisfied employees and stockholders.

其二：“句尾，平静补充之地。”

其出现的理想位置是段落之首，并且它一般都由两个部分组成：topic＋controlling meaning

他的名言可翻译为：

I learned from this experience, and promised myself I would not try to imitate another actress, in order to create my character. Persevering, I was anxious to audition for the winter play just two months later.

【写作语言分析】

SCORE OF 6

【文章内容分析】

文章结构清楚，段落过渡自然（如第三段的第一句话起到了承上启下的作用，即My sister is a contrast to Jewel's effective combination of talent and motivation.）。作者具有一定的驾驭语言的能力（如wither from neglect等），句式结构多变，该简单就简单，该用笔墨的地方就用笔墨，而且全文没有文法上的错误。

全篇结构严密，举例非常恰当，充分证明了人的价值不仅仅取决于他的创造量。两个例子一个是曾鼓噪一时的美国安然事件，一个是美国前总统和一个儿童故事书作家的对比，都是阅卷者耳熟能详的。

而且，就是这一个例子，作者也是把笔墨放在介绍失事过程上而不是放在失事给美国带来什么教训上。

比如说，第四篇范文“人们都希望听到真心回答吗”，使用的结构是：第一句话反对观点“Most people ... will say that ...”＋“Is this really true?”＋接下来提出自己的观点。

The abolitionists, such as Harriet Beecher Stowe and William Iloyd Garrison,were heroes in their own time. Before the Civil War, people in all sections of the country thought that African Americans。

既然结尾段落是全文的总结，第一句最好把自己的中心论点再重复一次。

上面谈到的关于SAT作文的开头结尾和正文的写法，是一个行之有效的套路，同学们可以按这个模式去练习，逐步形成适合自己的一个写作方式。

In the literary world, success is measured by the number of books sold. Authors who sell millions of books are valued morethan those who sell hundreds of books, so it appears that worth, in this case, is best judged by a writer's productivity. This scenario, however, is misleading, since one writer may produce a single work that becomes a best-seller in comparison to another writer who produces dozens of works each of which sell a limited number. Which writer truly has more worth? A specific example o illustrate this scenario is Bill Clinton compared to Judy Blume. Clinton recently published his memories, which will likely be very successful and become a best-seller. Blume, the author of many books for teenagers, probably hasn't and won't ever appear on the best-seller list. Is Clinton worth more because his name and political career make his book successful? Or is Blume worth more because her portrayals of teen life affect many meaningful criteria of judging worth.

最后一段就两句话，显得头重脚轻。

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