课程标题：2019年洛阳雅思培训考试

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【文章内容分析】

英语写作评分标准高档要求：应用了较多的语法结构或词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。从历年写作高分文章来看，每篇文章都有 亮 点，即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。

一、词汇选择 标新立异

在写作中 较高级词汇 的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

紧接着，作者强调，如果只一味强调成功而忽视失败，我们就会漏掉人生中许多宝贵的经验教训。

大学课堂的传统的教学方式是，一个教授和二三十名学生每周见面两三次，每次授课时间45到50分钟。

二. 人数用阿拉伯数字表示显得更简洁明了，但不定数量、近似值用单词表示较恰当。

Another unsuccessful endeavour was the Vietnam War. America sent troops to Vietnam to prevent the country from becoming Communist. However, after many years of struggle, the troops were withdrawn and Vietnam fell to the Communist party. But this failure had much value. On one hand, our failure in Vietnam led to an important lesson in successful war strategy. The experience of the fierce guerrilla warled to changes in tactics that later helped America in other conflicts. Also, the Vietnam failure helped change the American culture. People protested the war and the government responded to the voice of the public. These important changes show the value that can come from failure.

这种思辨特质也是美国名校所青睐的，本文获得高分也就不足为奇了。（不怕犯错，不怕好笑，就怕没有独到的见解，这种特点，与我们中国学生比较循规蹈矩的习惯并不符合。所以大家在组织观点时，一定要注意规避中式英语及中式思维。）

这些问题主要是因为笔误引起，所以这次再版，基本保留第一版的原貌，仅去掉了笔误，修正了表达不是很严谨的地方。在此向各位致歉。

但是泰坦尼克在一开始就是很boring的，有30分钟就在那讲打捞沉船的细节，在观众快不能忍受的时候，导演给Rose的眼睛一个大大的特写，从那蔚蓝的眼睛中霎时跳出了泰坦尼克号邮轮，这个经典的爱情故事才算是正式开始了。

Based on the two passages, Douglass and Dana differ in their views of the effect of the CivilWar in that Douglass believes that the war has…（观点）

第二节　方程组

2. It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it.

Perhaps another thing that gives this away is the asking of a question that cannot be answered correctly. One of the most popular examples of this is when a woman askssomeone if she looks fat in whatever she is wearing. It may seem like a simple, harmless question, but there is, in fact, no right way to answer this question. If the reply is yes, the woman will surely get angry and upset because now she thinks she's fat. However, if the reply is no, she will surely accuse the responder of lying. In situations like these, it may be best to just not answer at all. I know that's my father's philosophy when my mother poses such questions.

Soon, the politicians will revert back to what they all want power and continuous popularity. For example, George. W. Bush have been saying he will end the war in the Middle East since 2003. Now, in 2008, the war is continuing raging fervently.

for/from want of 缺少……

The flowers died from want of water.

花缺少水而枯死了。

Some of the wounded soldiers died for want of medicine.

有些士兵药物而死去。

for the use of 供……使用的

This parking lot is for the use of employees only.

停车场只供员工使用。

This dining hall is for the use of teachers.

饭堂是供教师使用的。

in support of 支持……，拥护……

He spoke at the meeting in support of my idea.

他在会上讲话支持我的想法。

They decided to stay in support of the new leadership.

支持新的班子，决定留下来。

so as to （做）……，以便（做）……

They made a lot of lively programs so sas to attract more children.

一个考生的SAT作文将由两位阅卷者评判。

在A和B中，A在and后是个V-ing结构，不能和and前面的名词构成平行，排除。

这种思辨特质也是美国名校所青睐的，本文获得高分也就不足为奇了。（不怕犯错，不怕好笑，就怕没有独到的见解，这种特点，与我们中国学生比较循规蹈矩的习惯并不符合。所以大家在组织观点时，一定要注意规避中式英语及中式思维。）

(B)and people become more dependent

在SAT考试中，经常也会考查下列结构的平行。

ing in a natural tone, using figures of speech sparingly and omitting needless words.

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