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Success is achievement of something desired, planned, or attempted. However, just because an endeavour was unsuccessful does not mean it is without value. The failed Columbia mission and the Vietnam War are two such examples.

在第一段，如果作者把下面要举例的两个人（Julius Caesar和William Shakespeare）在第一段提及一下会更好。

根据每次真题的打分表来看，如果作文满分12分，即使49道语法试题是0分的话，考生依然可以在写作部分的800分中拿到370分左右。

An essay in this category demonstrates clear and consistent mastery, although it may have a few minor errors. A typical essay

Every age, and every culture has its heroes. In some times and places the heroes have been gods or god-like creatures from mythology, or mortals apparently much above the mass of humanity. But today,sports stars, film stars, and political leaders with clay feet have replaced Ram, Achilles, Cleopatra, and Alexander. In fact there are almost no heroes of any age that can withstand our tendency to debunk. There are figures who will always be in the history books, but they won't always be regarded as heroes.

exhibits skillful use of language, using a varied, accurate, and apt vocabulary

另外，作者在适当的时候用了一些过渡词（如although, however, yet, but, instead和so等），使文章的逻辑性更加清晰。

SAMPLE ESSAYS WITH SCORES

即这个例子和你的中心观点之间的关系要在正文中体现出来，而不能是纯粹在正文部分讲个故事。

另外，开始一句话是不完整句子（sentence fragment），犯了一个语法大忌。

这是一篇5分作文。

要对整个例子进行深度挖掘，正文部分往往写成narrative（叙述）的形式。

is generally free of most errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics

在开始段落，作者提出了核心观点，并且也给出了thesis statement。

最后一段就两句话，显得头重脚轻。

Assignment: What is your view of the claim that something unsuccessful can stillhave some value? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

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