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in search of 寻找……，寻求……

He went to the south in search of better prospects.

他寻找的前途到南方去。

She immigrated to New Zealand in search of a quiet life.

她过上平静的生活移民到新西兰去。

for the sake of/for ones sake 为……起见，……

His family moved to the countryside for the sake of his sons health.

(B)it is using

Traditionally the term "heroism" has been applied to those who have braved physical danger to defend a cause or to protect others. But one of the most feared dangers people face is that of disapproval by their family, peers, or community. Sometimes acting courageously requires someone to speak out at the risk of such rejection. We should consider those who do so true heroes.

第二段，作者提到Jewel曾经非常落魄，还举了一些细节比如她一度以自己的车子为家（she was living in her car），但是她坚信自己成为一代歌手的梦想会实现。

(C)were swimming so slowly; so her coaches thought something has been

Some ... （the type that the author does not approve ）

第二段，讲“我”上社会课，要去询问老人所经历过的改变（we had an assignmentto interview an older person about the changes he or she had witnessed）。

此句中their显然是指dogs and wolves，但SAT并不这样认为，它认为也有可能是指scientists和dogs，也可能指scientists和wolves。

If no student can be enrolled in more than one of the three activities and there are 108 members in the three activities, how many students are in the band?

工作时间不得擅离职守或早退。
Working hours shall not be absent from duty or leave early.
汤姆诱使他的几个朋友擅离职守。
Tom enticed some of his friends away from their work.
他们以损毁他名声的办法迫使他离职。
They have him hounded out by a conspiracy to damage his good name.
一个斟酒服务员要离职了，老板给了他顶替上去的机会。

在造句时, 较高级词汇 如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句 与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了 主语 谓语 宾语 结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用 there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: It\'s a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: It\'s a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇 独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

那么，考生如何吸引住考官的注意力呢？对于一个观点，可以使用不同的词汇进行解释、强化。

I\'m not Tom.我不是汤姆。(I\'m是I am的缩写，读作/aim/。)

这就暗示我们，本题可以考虑使用证反题的方式来反驳。

学员们在自己分析时，希望能够着重理解教师教授的功能性语言技巧的同时，注意founding documents以及真题中，出现的能够支撑这些主旨，观点和态度的evidence，培养有理必须有据的逻辑思维习惯。

“不积跬步，无以至千里，不积小流，无以成江河”。

【写作语言分析】

例：The positive number n is the product of three different prime numbers greater than 2. If the sum of these three prime numbers is also prime, what is the smallest possible value of n?

文章从第二段到倒数第二段，使用的是一种非常轻松（当然不是口语化）的口吻，介绍了自己起初如何不懂得学习，而后来历史课上老师的提问，以及其他同学对于非记忆知识的投入，感染了他，让他认识到学习原来还这么有趣，认识到在背诵、死记事实背后还有更高的层次，让他经历了“背诵到理解”、“惧怕到爱好”的过程。

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